Having said that, there's something of an unwritten history in
Empire State
. The Skyguard and Science Pirate were the protectors of New York before they turned on each other, and as Rex watches their final battle over the half-completed Empire State Building near the beginning of the book he makes reference to the "Golden Age of Heroism" – clearly there was a time when superheroes were common, probably not just in New York but all over the US and even the world. Perhaps the Roaring Twenties was a decade of superheroics, before everything goes wrong with the stock market crash of 1929?
There's plenty of scope to explore that era – in fact, I'm hoping creators will expand on this as part of the WorldBuilder project.
Any chance of EMPIRE STATE ever becoming a comic book? Who would you hand-pick to be the book's artist, in a perfect world?
Hey, I'd love
Empire State
to become a comic book! Right back when the early drafts of various bits and pieces were being read by the writer's group I used to belong to, I started getting feedback that it felt like a "graphic novel in prose form", as one reader put it! Much later, when Marc
[Gascoigne, Angry Robot's publishing director]
and I were looking at the cover roughs, he said he thought the one we ultimately selected looked and felt like the kind of cover you'd have on the front of a quality indie graphic novel, which I thought was a pretty cool way of looking at it.
It would certainly be fascinating to see the transition from 120,000 words of prose into an ongoing series, although it would be a hell of a long story arc! Then again, think of the pay off for the reader when they get to the end! My dream artist would be J. H. Williams III, no doubt about it. His work is jaw-dropping – if you look at something like
Batwoman
it's like nothing else on Earth.
Private dick Rad Bradley was once known as "Rad Bradbury" – was this a reference to Ray Bradbury? You've got other potential allusions peppered throughout, too: Byron, Nimrod, etc. Are these on purpose? Any people might have missed?
Ah, the death of Rad Bradbury. He was the Amazon query fail – a couple of years ago, I was looking for something by Ray Bradbury on Amazon, so I typed in my search and hit enter. I looked away for a moment, then when I looked back was confused by the lack of results. The reason was a simple typo – I'd entered "Rad" instead of "Ray". Instantly the name "Rad Bradbury" leapt off the screen – this was clearly a private detective from a 1930s pulp novel, a tough guy, not afraid to punch his way out of trouble. It had a rhythm when you said it out loud, and a weirdness about it that felt just right, if that makes any sense. For some reason, he appeared to me immediately as a large black man, bald, out of shape but who you knew was a prize fighter back in the day.
The initial draft of the book was called
Rad Bradbury Versus the Empire State
, again because I was going for maximum pulp. I figured soon enough that the name would be a distraction on the cover – people would easily mistake it for Ray Bradbury, or for some pastiche – so I shortened it to just
Empire State
, but the name of the hero stuck.
Empire State
took the best part of a year to write, and as with any writer I was so involved in the story and the characters that I really forgot about the origins of Rad's name. It was only when my signing to Angry Robot was announced that people started asking me whether Rad Bradbury was anything to do with Ray Bradbury. I was confused – I'd lived with him for so long that there was no connection at all for me, but I then realized it was a going to be a speed bump for readers, and why make trouble?
I chose Rad's new surname because I wanted to keep the rhythm and the Rad/Brad beat that sounded so good in my head, so he became Rad Bradley. This was a much better name as not only did it lose the Ray Bradbury thing but it became a nod to another pulp detective, the great Slam Bradley, who appeared in the pages of
Detective Comics
a full year before Batman did.
We were back to the beginning, to the 1930s, to pulp detectives and Golden Age comics. Rad Bradley was born.
The other characters are less literary, more musical – as I mentioned, Captain Carson most definitely does
not
appear in
No Lucifer
by British Sea Power, but you'll find Nimrod, Mr Jones and Mr Grieves inhabiting Pixies songs (
Nimrod's Son, Crackity Jones
, and
Mr Grieves
, to be precise). Music is a big influence on my writing and I like to throw in imagery and ideas from my favourite songs where appropriate. There are a couple more buried in
Empire State
– see if you can find them! In fact, there are a number of songs which have a strong connection to the book for me, not just because they influenced the story or imagery, but because during the writing or editing I found myself listening to them on high rotation. Interested readers can go check out the playlist at the end of this chat.
Byron might be named after the great poet, but he was a dog originally. Or, in the weird parallel universe where there really was a famous polar explorer called Captain Carson, he had a dog called Byron that he took everywhere, even the north pole. When Byron died, he was stuffed and now sits in Carson's library by the fire.
Hey, there are an infinite number of parallel universes. What I just said was entirely true. Somewhere.
Carson's history in the Pocket – and in the Origin, specifically his involvement with the development of the Naval robots – demanded a slightly different role for Byron, and I'm afraid a dog wasn't quite what I needed.
Every book has the DNA of its authors wound between the words and pages. Where are you in this? Not just the pop culture influences, but how is this book clearly a book that only Adam Christopher could've written?
You're enjoying asking the difficult questions, aren't you?
That's how my Angry Robot overlords programmed me. So please answer the question, and ignore the whirrin photon cannon at the small of your back.
I guess when it comes down to it you're talking about voice, and voice is something that develops over time and isn't something a writer can – or should – try and influence. It's also hard for a writer to see it themselves –
Empire State
was the third novel I wrote, and right now as we speak I'm in the middle of
Night Pictures
, my sixth novel. When I compare the two I can "see" that the same person wrote both, but if you were to ask me
how
I can see this, I couldn't give you an easy answer. Is that "voice"? I don't know. I'm going to pretend I know what I'm talking about and say "yes"!
Actually, thinking about it, you've asked a devilishly difficult and also very important question. To me, you can always tell a Stephen King book is a Stephen King book. In fact, you can tell a Stephen King book is a Stephen King book so well that you can also tell that a
Richard Bachman
book is a Stephen King book! There's no way I'm going to put myself in the same sentence as King (and watch as I squirm to avoid doing just that – damn you, Wendig!), but it's a fascinating question.
Also
Empire State
is pretty far-out and weird, and I certainly don't subscribe to the theory that everything a writer writes is somehow autobiographical. I guess there's a piece of me in all the characters, but isn't that the same for every writer?
My brain hurts. Next!
The book keeps you guessing – you never know where it's going next. Further, allegiances are constantly in question and we have betrayals and double betrayals and all manner of plot tangles and plot twists. Hell, some characters are actually multiple characters (Chairman/Missingest Man/Pastor). How did you keep track of it all? Both before you wrote and during?
I outlined the book quite heavily, although I find I work best when my outline is more like a series of linked events. When I start, I usually know the beginning, middle and end, and probably a handful of the key scenes in between. Then it's a matter of stringing them together in the right order.
I work that way because I tend to go off on tangents while I write, so a lot of time spent on a very detailed outline seems a bit of a waste when I end up ignoring probably half of it anyway.
But another important thing for me – and, dare I suggest, most writers – is that when things get going, the story starts to write itself and the characters start to develop a sort of weird independence. So while a lot of the twists and revelations in the book were there are the beginning, quite a few were surprises even to me, the writer! The scene where Carson turns traitor and pulls a gun on Rad near the end came completely out of leftfield – I remember writing it, finishing the chapter on a cliffhanger, and sitting back from the computer for a few minutes trying to work out what on Earth was going on. I think I was also grinning from ear to ear for the rest of the night!
As I'm sure you know, when that happens in the middle of a project, you know something good is going on. Originally, the Pastor, the Commissioner, and Judge Crater were all separate people – or were at various stages shifting combinations of two of the three – then suddenly their conjoined identities were revealed. It was almost as if the Pastor had walked into my office and whipped his hood off before laughing manically, like Number 1 at the end of
The Prisoner.
The Missingest Man in New York was actually a real person who vanished – in fact, his disappearance was big news in 1930, so much so that "Judge Crater, call your office" was a popular joke on the standup comedy scene. I knew I needed someone from New York – a real historical figure – to have an equivalent, evil doppelganger in the Empire State, and for a while I tried using various Mayors of New York City, or other official figures, but nothing quite worked how I wanted it to.
Then one day I stumbled across the Wikipedia entry on Judge Crater quite by accident. It was one of those lightening bolt moments –
Shazam!
I had my villain!
I find it fascinating how major events of the past can be so quickly forgotten. Poor Judge Crater, whose possibly mob-related disappearance was once such a scandal. And now he's a dimension-jumping supervillain with a few too many personalities trapped inside his skull.
It's how he would have liked to have been remembered, I'm sure.
Probably the freakiest part of this whole book for me is the nature of the Enemy. A big ol' question mark hangs over the Enemy for most of the book and even once we realize the truth it still bakes the noodle. It's great, because in a roundabout way it's saying that the Empire State is its own Enemy, and that one's greatest foe is often oneself. But where did that come from? Was it always intended to be that way? Or was that part of the story that wrote itself?
That was one of the things I'd planned, for sure. I wanted to explore what would happen if you endlessly reflected the different "states" within the story – so, New York becomes the Empire State, the Empire State becomes the Enemy, the Enemy becomes…?
I loved the concept of being at war with something you can't see and don't even know the name of – the fact that the Empire State turns its citizens into killing machines and sends them off into the fog, never to be seen again, is terrifying. The Empire State is locked in this kind of stasis, a never-ending nightmare. And then one robot comes back because the Chairman said it could, and up in the boardroom when he asks the machine if they can have peace the robot immediately answers back that they can, because the Chairman is really just talking to himself through the machine. It's pure horror, plain and simple. No wonder the Chairman has a breakdown when the truth finally hits him.
But, as you suggest, there is more to it than that, and that's where the various interlocking parts of the plot came together in various independent stages. "Theme" is like "voice" – I'm not sure a writer can fully control it. So, one's greatest foe is often oneself – as with the two sides of Crater, both working in opposing directions although both leading ultimately to the destruction of both the Pocket and the Origin. Kane tries to enlist Rad but is led astray and turns against him, with his own internal struggle where he has to pick his loyalties. And then there's Rad and Rex – a quite literal example, two opposing forces who are
the exact same person.
You took a trip to New York City after
Empire State
was written, yeah? How did that feel? Was that your first time to NYC?
Actually, although I've spent quite a lot of time in the US and had spent a night in New York en route to Toronto back in 2003, my first "proper" visit to the city wasn't until September 2011! But I'd done a boatload of research and I was quietly relieved that I hadn't screwed much up! Writing something set both in the 1930s and in a parallel dimension probably helped too, because it allowed me to bend the real geography and history a little to suit the story. But, whether I had encyclopedic, first-hand knowledge of the real New York or not, that would have happened anyway.
Empire State
is a work of fiction, and both New York City and the Empire State described within are fictitious.
One thing that did strike me on that September visit was the scale of the place. The United States is a very large country, and New York City is a very large city, but you really need to go there to understand that. I'm a city boy myself, but nothing compares to New York. It's wonderful and amazing and
gigantic.
Definitely my favourite place on Earth so far.
Did you meet your otherworldly self somewhere in Manhattan? That's actually a fine follow-up: what's the Pocket version of Adam Christopher up to?