Fins 4 Ur Sins
Authors: Naomi Fraser
FINS 4 UR SINS
by
Naomi Fraser
Copyright © 2015 by
Naomi Fraser
Cover Art by Annette
Shaff
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Typography by Naomi
Fraser
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This is a work of
fiction. Names, characters, places, brands, media, and incidents are either the
product of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously, and any
resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, business establishments, events,
or locales is entirely coincidental.
Dedication
For my girls
Acknowledgements
This list is long,
but everyone here deserves a mention. First of all, I’d like to thank my
daughter, Rhiana. You answered all of my questions any time of the day or night
and were there when I dreamt up so many things. Thanks to Brad who doesn’t mind
when I spend entire days inside my writing cave, a place where I’m happy. Thank
you to my awesome critique partners: Teresa,
Rashda
,
Petrina
, Judy, Donna, Tanya, Joan, Emma, Karen, Kathy,
Misty, Ashlee, Diane, Carolyn, Brandie, Edna and John. Thanks to Katie Townsend
and Shane Girl for the times when you listened and expressed excitement in my
story. That kind of encouragement is priceless. Thank you to Rebecca Allman who
read the final pages.
Angels—each and every one of you.
1
NAUSEA SQUEEZES MY
belly,
and I
moan in pain. My chest hurts, probably from lying on my stomach. I try to roll
onto my back and frown, disorientated for a second. I’m not on my stomach. I’d
slept on my back the night before? I never do that. I’ve been a stomach sleeper
like . . . forever. My sticky, gritty eyes open with difficulty.
Halogen lights glare back from a
strange white ceiling. Wait—my bedroom ceiling is dark blue with
glow-in-the-dark stars—the last birthday present from my dad.
Where am I?
“Eloise?” It’s my mum’s voice.
Frantic.
“Baby?”
“Sore,” I whisper, though I
realise I can’t move my body. “What,” a breath, “happened?”
“Oh, wake up, honey. Come on;
open your eyes all the way for me.” Mum’s voice drums through the fog and my
right ear pounds. “You can do it.”
I moan again and try to struggle
into a semi-sitting position, but I gasp at the pain. Breathe in and out. I
can’t get up. A needle protrudes from my left hand. I wiggle my fingers and the
sharp metal digs in deeper.
She rests her hand on my shoulder
in a soft, soothing restraint. “Shh . . . just open your eyes for me. You fell
and you’re in the hospital.”
My eyelids slit open further, and
I take in the white shelves, large window, blinds and the strong scent of
disinfectant. “I hurt,” I croak between lips that feel paper thin. “The pain—”
My voice breaks, and sweat beads on my forehead.
“My chest.”
She nods and leans down to stare
into my eyes. Her face is a mess of tears. Sections of her features have
forgotten their place and smeared mascara dribbles from the corner of her eyes
to her trembling lips. A tic pulsates above her right eyebrow. She rubs her red
nose, wiping tears from her cheeks. The whiteness of her skin is ghastly. I’ve
never seen her look so frightened, not even when Dad died. “You fell from the
cliff at the back of the house.”
My eyelids are heavy—eyes itchy
and burning. A shadow moves beside me, something solid.
Person?
Nurse?
Then a cold wash fills the vein in my left arm
and a drugging lethargy means I’m about to fall back asleep. Thank heavens.
“From the
cliff?
Our cliff?”
“Yes, honey.”
“How?”
I
gasp and cry out, slowing my breaths to control the pain.
Mum’s mouth presses in a
slippery, grim line.
“Never mind.
Rest
now.
The doctor will be here soon to check you over.” She grabs my other
hand and squeezes my fingers. By the soft murmurs, it sounds like she’s
praying. “I’m so grateful you’re alive, baby.”
Her palm is soft and warm. My
eyelids lower. “‘Kay, Mum. Sleep . . .” I slur.
“. . . NEED TO FIGURE out what is going on in her life.”
A murky film opens before my eyes
and a man in a white coat speaks to my mother at the foot of the bed. A
stationary light shines into my eyes. I cringe, closing them again. I try to talk,
but agony squeezes my chest and all I can do is let out a puff of hot air. The
drugs must be wearing off.
“Has she shown any signs of
depression? Does she have a boyfriend? She’s incredibly lucky to be with us.
Her heart stopped for a minute or two there. We had to resuscitate and then
revive her.”
Huh, I don’t even remember a
white light. I force my eyelids open again and will the doctor to tell me more.
Mum’s forehead tightens and her
mouth trembles. She pushes the heels of her hands into her eyes and the
sapphire ring on her finger glints in the light, reminding me of Dad. “No, no
boyfriend that I know of. I never thought . . . I just can’t believe it. She
wouldn’t do it. Not Eloise. It just isn’t her,” Mum mutters.
The need to believe threads her voice.
I can tell she’s sticking up for me, whatever I’ve done this time, but I can’t
comfort her, hug her, or say anything, because my lungs won’t let me. What
wouldn’t I do?
Ice picks stab at my brain, but I
can’t tell anyone. The drag and gurgle of water blocks my chest so words will
not form. My body lies floppy and spent—a flattened blow-up doll the dog has
chewed to bits. Every nerve and fibre feels caught in a vice-like grip.
Mum reaches back and rubs my
foot. “What can I do?” she asks, choking back tears.
I moan. Yay me! I made a sound.
But no, it’s because Mum’s fingers are like nooses on my toes. All the cells
have detonated in my foot.
Mum,
I shout in my head,
if you can hear
me, please, please let me go.
“Her lungs will heal, although
there may be some scarring. You need to talk to her, urge her do things that
make her happy. Does she have a lot of friends?”
“Not really,” Mum answers.
A police officer saunters in from
the corner of the room, his blue uniform a blur in my straining vision. “
Mrs.
Mitchell, your daughter wasn’t pushed and her injuries
indicate she didn’t fall. The signs show she jumped. The tracks from her window
led straight to the cliff.”
“Her father died last summer.
Cancer.”
Mum’s voice crumbles, and then her hand slips on
the sterile white bench, her body shaking. “Eloise left all her friends behind
with the move here. It’s been a rough couple of years for both of us.”
Rough, as in
turning my life into a topsy-turvy nightmare.
My eyes tear up.
“I’m recommending counselling for
you both, starting next week.” The doctor’s pager beeps and he checks the
device. “You’ll have to excuse me. I’m needed in the ER. I’ll be in touch about
your daughter.
If you’d like to come with me, Officer?”
Mum shifts closer to the bed in a
soft rustle. Her heels tap the floor. She smells of lavender and dried down,
sweet perfume. Her hand rests in my hair, skin against skin, caressing the
strands from my forehead.
Warm tears seep from my eyes,
trailing into my ears. “I love you, Mum,” sticks in my throat.
I’M AT MY regular appointment at the Mental Health facility
in Redlands Hospital. The chairs are upholstered in
an awful
,
brown, fake leather, and squeak when I fidget. The carpet is a low pile grey, offset
with white walls and calming black-and-white prints. A vase of red flowers
brightens an otherwise dark corner.
Low lighting delineates the
psychiatrist’s face.
Dr.
Farrow begins the session by
looking at me with the ability to peer right through my skin. She asks me to
put my pain in the palm of her hand. Truth be told, I’m happy to share it for a
while.
“How are you feeling today,
Eloise? Do you have anything you want to share?
Nightmares
still troubling you?”
A tear
drips
down my cheek and I rub it away with my sleeve, careful not to dislodge my
bandages. I stare at the white gauze on my hands, wondering what to say.
Considering tourists found me face down on the sand, water lapping my body and
seaweed wrapped around my feet, I’m peachy. I’m alive, at least. Back then, a
fishing knife made short work of the weed.
I was blue.
Deathly
cold.
But one of the tourists wrapped me in her woollen jacket in a last
ditch effort to save my life.
No pulse, so the police officers
told me, when my mum and I constantly pestered them for extra information. But
there are other things I want to ask
Dr.
Farrow,
stuff the
officers
hint at, but never reveal. They
look at my face and clam up, and I want to know why.
“I’m excited to go home today. I
didn’t jump off the cliff, so why wouldn’t I be all right? I’m still sore if
that’s what you mean, but I don’t know why everyone . . . likes to believe I’d
deliberately do something like that.” My gaze lands on the blinds and I blow
out a breath, shifting forward in the seat. A sharp sliver of pain rockets up
my ribcage, all the way to my neck. I suck in a gasp and then sag against the
seat, resting my neck on the top of the cushion. “You know, kill myself.”
“I don’t think that,” she says.
“I want to give you a hard copy of some exercises to take home since this is
your last day in hospital. I’ll be back in a minute.”
When she exits the room, I pitch
the last of the tissues into the wastepaper basket. My chest and lungs scream
in protest, but I’m used to the pain, so I shift on the seat again, trying to
grab a new box of tissues from her shelf. Darn thing’s too far away.
Typical.
I reach out for the box, but slip and then
accidentally knock over a white envelope.
Photos spill out onto the carpet.
I wouldn’t have touched them—but my hair is a particular shade—white. A deep
sickness plucks strings in my stomach. A magician
says,
pick a card, any card. Oh, you picked the death card. I bend over and spread
them out. My chest squeezes.
Those pictures.
They are
of me.
Me.
Bloated, grey puffer fish. A hollow ache throbs in my bones.
I slip the photos back into the envelope, my hands shaking as I press down on
the sticky flap.
Dr.
Farrow strides back into her office, her eyes missing nothing, but I focus my
gaze on her brown loafers. The photos are back in place and I have a new box of
tissues on my lap with my arms crossed. Everything looks perfect on the
outside, even if on the inside, I’m in pieces.
“I don’t feel people are telling
me the whole truth. I want to know more, not just what the police want to tell
me,” I say in a low, rusty tone. The photos reel through my mind and I grit my
teeth. I looked dead. “It makes it harder for me to recover when I can’t
remember much. How long did I lay on the sand? Why did the police ask me if my
friends are thinking about jumping off the cliff as well? Why would they do
that?”
Dr.
Farrow sighs and sinks down on her soft chair, a stack of paperwork in her
hands. “The police have already talked to you, haven’t they?” she hedges. “What
did they say?”
That they’d discovered my bloody
trail—tracked it from my bedroom window to the precipice over the bay. I’d done
the old slice and dice with the partially closed bedroom window. They asked
more than they answered though, only saying enough to keep me talking and in
the dark. The evidence proved I’d broken through the window, but why would I do
that? Or leap off a bluff? They wanted to know things I didn’t know myself.
I wouldn’t have jumped. Death
came to visit me a year ago—if you could call watching
death’s
handiwork with my father a mere visit—and nothing would make me want to commit
suicide. But I can’t answer their questions fully, because I don’t remember the
cuts on my hands and feet, the walk across the lawn or the fall from the cliff.
Every time I try, my brain aches
with the pain of a thousand burning suns.
A wink of purple flashes in
Dr.
Farrow’s gaze then disappears. She must wear coloured
contact lenses. “What do you remember about that time?”
“Oh.” I close my eyes, trying to
scrounge up a memory, but a headache thumps at my temples with the
relentlessness of a pile driver. The pain grows, squeezing over and over like a
cap of rose thorns. Sweat beads my forehead and my mouth goes sticky. I rest my
elbows on my knees, chin on hands;
all the
better to get
a hold of my head before it implodes. “I remember my dad’s face, thinking I’d
see him again,” I whisper. God, how crazy does that sound? Will the doctor
think I wanted to kill myself with that admission? I hurry on: “But I often
have dreams like that. Maybe it’s a hint of the ‘why’ that’s eluding me.” A
sweetly magical melody skates at the far reaches of my memory and my skin
prickles before nausea stampedes across my tongue. A swirling pain churns in my
head. “I probably would have seen my dad if I’d been successful. Ha!”
I wipe my mouth with another
tissue, spitting out the sour taste.
“You’re sure there isn’t anything
else?”
I stop rubbing my temple and look
at
Dr.
Farrow, silently questioning the trepidation
in her voice instead of her usual empathy.
“Perhaps you could write in a
journal if the memory returns? We can delve through them at your next session.
Although, if you told me more now, perhaps I could work with you. Tell you more
of what I know.”
I straighten in my seat, too
excited by the idea she will tell me what the police have been keeping from me.
I know they have something that will help me remember. My teeth worry at my
bottom lip. “I recall music,” I blurt, “a song.
This weird,
fantastic melody.
But that’s it other than my dad’s face.”
“Aha.”
Dr.
Farrow
unwraps
a wad of gum and then pops it into her
mouth. Her teeth snap at the sweet, and a waft of synthetic grape tickles my
nose. It’s almost a ritual for her, and in some way, it soothes me. Pop, chew,
direct question, and then her hands shake as if she would kill to have a
cigarette, but that makes me like her more. She stops chewing, her eyes widen
and then her tongue pokes against the inside of her cheek. “The package said
grape flavoured.” She frowns.
“Very strange, but nice.
Sweet.”
Yesterday, it was strawberry.
Before that was cola. I’m amazed she hasn’t pulled out the chocolate bars.
She’s like a kid in an adult’s body. “Well, they add sugar to lollies, which
makes them sweeter. I like the real flame seedless grapes best, but if the gum
is so strange, why buy it?”
She stares as if I’ve asked the
most insane question ever and then scratches her head. “Oh,” she clears her
throat, “I like trying new things. I wasn’t expecting that taste however.” She
catches my confused look and drops her gaze to her fingers.
“Right.
The music.
The song.
And your dad.”
She sighs as though I’ve asked a question she
doesn’t want to answer. “What else do you remember?”
“Waking up.
Bright lights.
A hard hospital bed.
Cold room.”
I shake my head.
“My mum
at my side.
The song is there, at the edges of my memory—but, oh, it
hurts. It sounded so beautiful, you know? Like a breath of something I thought
I can recall, but it’s impossible, because it was a dream. Everything is so
confusing, as if it’s all a blur.”
“
Mmm
.”
She smiles, but her eyes look wary. “That’s
all right for now. You can write more in your journal when it comes to you.”
She rises from her seat and pats me on the shoulder, but when I peer up into
her eyes, the sight of her face makes my heart stop.
The doctors and everyone I
usually meet in hospital wear similar expressions. It drives me mad, adult
superiority. They believe I wanted to kill myself, for whatever reason, but
none of them say it to my face. I silently beg them to admit they’re wrong, even
if they haven’t made the direct accusation. They look down at me with
that
face.
But
Dr.
Farrow’s expression isn’t like that at all: she’s ashen, and her lips stretch,
while her eyebrows draw tightly together. The skin strains around her eyes, and
even though they’re wide, I can tell she’s not seeing much.
“Aren’t you going . . . to tell
me more?” I raise my eyebrows at her and lick my lips. “You know how you
promised we would work together on—”
“Your state of mind,” she begins,
inching back toward her seat, taking the scent of grape with her. “You might
not be able to cope, and I wouldn’t want to disturb you further. The police
told you—”
“The bare facts,” I state flatly
and shake my head. “Please. I don’t want to beg, but you can’t bail out on me
now. I know there’s more.” The bandages are smooth enough to make my arms slip
on the rests. I can’t get comfortable no matter how hard I try. “Little bits
are worse than nothing. I will find out anyway. I go home today, back out into
the real world.”
Dr.
Farrow flicks her gaze over my face, as if assessing my determination. “Yes,
you do.” She presses her lips together, and a silence stretches. “It’s against
procedure, but . . .” she puffs out a huge breath, “in your case, it’s worth
it. There have been similar deaths to yours. The police are investigating all
of them. Three teenagers were found like you were on the beach, two before and
one after your admittance to hospital. All of them are from the same
neighbourhood and school, but none of them survived.”
