their retreat; all are obliged to renounce their sweethearts and wives. For a while everything goes well enough. Everyone abides by the rules and engages in the prescribed activities, which include lawn tennis, bowls, baseball, lacrosse, gymnastics, and boating. Rather than trying to play tennis in their cumbersome robes, the young men, at Brother Festus's suggestion, wear nothing more than "simple bathing-suits"an idea defended at length:
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The tale ends on a strongly misogynic note, with females cast in the role of descending furies. (At the time of composition, Stoddard had begun to think of Belle Strong as an abductress, whose very presence in the Bungalow was a desecration and whose flirtation with Deering was unforgivable.) Sweethearts and wives rush through the gates, taking the Brothers "by storm" and leading them "away captive," thus perpetrating ''the rape of St. Aidenn."
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Although his writing gave Stoddard a diversion, it could not provide him with what he felt he needed mostlove. Although Stoddard kept trying out different strategies to win back Deering's affection, their friendship was more or less moribund by the end of 1883. In December, Stoddard took to his bed with a case of "boohoo fever," a malady with no known cause or cure, characterized by depression and weeping. 34 Stoddard prayed that this "illness" would finally melt the Kid's chilling indifference, but everyone in the household became solicitous except the Kid. Whiting and a local priest prescribed a change of scene, and they obtained for Stoddard a pass from the steamship company that allowed him to spend three restorative months in San Francisco.
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When he arrived back in Honolulu in March 1884, Stoddard found that Deering was still "distant" and "indifferent." Stoddard plied him with giftsa Japanese lantern, a kimono, two Japanese fans, a painting, a pipe bowl, and a Japanese friezeall to no avail. Deering gave the kimono to Belle, explaining, "She will appreciate it more than I do" (D
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