Perfect Daughter (4 page)

‘God, that sounds horrible!’ Jacks grimaced.

‘Why the interest in Swedish food all of a sudden?’ Her dad spoke with his mouth full and a couple of peas nearly made a quick getaway; he pushed them back in with his tongue.

‘No reason, it’s just a boy in my year is Swedish, he’s called Sven.’ She was delighted to have the opportunity to mention him, to say his name out loud.

‘Sven, eh? Isn’t he one of the blokes from Abba?’ Don smiled at his daughter.

Jacks laughed loudly. ‘No! He’s very clever and funny and…’ She once again pictured his face, his thick hair, his intense stare. ‘His dad’s an architect, works in Bristol, lots of kids take the p… mick out of him, but I think he’s just quirky, a bit different.’

She saw the look her parents exchanged. ‘Thought you liked Peter Davies?’ her mum asked as she squashed peas on to the back of her fork.

‘I do. But we’re just mates.’ Jacks concentrated on her plate of food, trying to erase the memory of their snog on the dancefloor of Mr B’s nightclub.

‘His mum thinks you’re more than mates, she told me you were going out with him. And he’s quite smitten apparently,’ Ida commented innocuously.

Jacks cringed. She had moved on from Pete and to be reminded of their connection irritated her. ‘Pete’s a plonker. Walks around like he’s Gary Lineker.’

‘He’s got a trial with Bristol City,’ her mum added, passing on more snippets of gossip.

‘Yes and don’t we know it, it’s all he talks about. Sven isn’t sporty, he’s going to go to university.’

‘Sven, Sven, Sven! I think I know someone else who’s a bit smitten.’ Her mum spoke to her dad over the table as if she wasn’t present.

‘I’m not!’ Jacks shouted. ‘He’s just a boy in my year, that’s all!’

‘Good,’ her dad said. ‘Peter’s a nice boy and we know his mum.’

‘What’s that got to do with anything?’ Jacks shouted back.

‘Stop yelling!’ Ida said. ‘There’s no need for dramatics.’

‘Dramatics? I don’t think I’m being dramatic, there’s you both telling me I practically have to marry Peter Davies just cos you know his mum!’

‘We never said anything of the sort!’ Ida tutted. ‘Honestly, Jackie!’

‘Good, cos I think I can do a bit better than a footballer who’s going to leave school with just enough qualifications to work in Maccy D’s.’

‘Don’t be so mean,’ Ida said.

‘I’m not, just truthful. Pete’s all right, but he’s not really my type. He’s staying in Weston, close to a football field, and I want to go to college and travel.’

‘To Sweden?’ her mum asked.

‘She can go anywhere she likes, can’t you, love?’ Her dad, ever supportive, smiled at her.

Ida placed her cutlery on the plate. ‘Of course she can. I didn’t say she couldn’t!’

‘No, but your face implied otherwise.’ Don shook his head.

‘Well, we all know you’d rather not have to look at my face.’

‘Oh, here we go…’

Jacks slipped from the table and up the stairs. She lay on her bed and could hear the burble of their row rising up through the floor. Flipping open her notebook, she ran the nib of her pen over the heart in which sat the name of the object of her affection.
Sven.

3

Jacks opened the cupboard under the stairs, unhooked her pale linen duster coat with oversized wooden buttons from the back of the door and slipped her slender frame into it. She pulled on her battered brown cowboy boots and picked up her car keys and the box of recycling that Pete had sorted for Jonty.

‘Oh, Jacks, can you pick up some razor blades? And we need cornflakes, kids have just polished off the last.’ This Pete shouted with his head poking over the banister from upstairs.

Jacks nodded. ‘Will do. See you later. Kids, come on! We are leaving now!’

Out on the pavement in Sunnyside Road, she shoved the box into the boot. ‘Morning, Ivor!’ She raised her hand to wave at the young man who lived next door with his wife; he was loading up his van ready for the day.

‘All right, Jacks! Bit nippy, innit?’ He rubbed his big hands together, a labouring man like Pete.

This made her smile. He, like her husband, seemed constantly surprised by the cold weather. She wanted to remind him that this was September and they lived in Weston-super-Mare, not the Bahamas. ‘Baba okay?’ she shouted back as she walked to the driver’s side – he and his wife Angela had an eight-week-old boy, Jayden.

‘Sound as a pound!’ He grinned. ‘Keeping us up all hours, screaming and shouting to be fed.’ He tutted.

‘Ah, sounds like mine and she’s eighty-one.’ She laughed.

‘Could be worse, Jacks.’ He laughed and she laughed too, although she wasn’t sure why. ‘Hope he doesn’t keep you awake,’ he said sheepishly.

‘Mate, don’t forget I’ve got two, been there done that. You have to not worry about him, he’s part of our little neighbourhood and that’s his way of letting us all know he’s here. He’s just chatting.’

Ivor picked up his toolbox and stowed it in the back. Jacks noted a flask and sandwich box and thought how lovely that Angela found time to make her man his lunch. Poor old Pete, who now had to make do with a quick drive-through when time allowed.

‘I just wish he’d chat between the hours of nine and five and the rest of the time keep quiet!’ Ivor chuckled.

‘Ah, if only it were that simple.’ She smiled as the kids ran from the front door, leaving it open for their dad to shut behind them as they jumped in the car.

‘
I
heard that baby last night. Drives me nuts.’ Martha tutted.

‘Oh, he’s a sweet little thing,’ Jacks said.

‘He’s a squirmy pink little thing that shouts a lot, very loudly. He just poos, sleeps and shouts. Don’t see what’s sweet about that.’

‘It’s different when it’s your own, you’ll see.’ Jacks laughed.

‘It’d have to be.’

‘All buckled up?’ Jacks asked.

They ignored her as usual, as the idea of not buckling up had never occurred to them.

Jacks parked in the lay-by and waved Jonty first and then Martha into their adjoining schools. She watched as her son wrestled with his school bag and the shallow box full of beer cans, the exercise hampered somewhat by his hands that were, as ever, covered by at least three inches of sleeve on his too-big sweatshirt that had to last the year.

‘Bless him. Clifton bloody Suspension Bridge!’ And she laughed, before letting the window roll down an inch and breathing deeply.

There was a bus that practically went door to door on the four-mile round-trip to school. In fact, she allowed the kids to travel home under their own steam as long as they were together or with friends. Pete had offered on more than one occasion to take them in, but Jacks always refused the help. This daily venture out in the car meant so much more to her than simply dropping the kids off. It was the only twenty minutes in the entire day that she was completely alone, where no one could get to her, and she needed it.

Sitting back in the seat, with her head on the headrest, she took another deep breath. The faintest scent of her dad still lingered in the fabric and she welcomed it, letting this small fragment of him envelop her in a hug. A vast black 4x4 pulled in behind her, dispensed three blonde children of various ages from the back seat and quickly pulled out again. Jacks looked into the car as it passed and caught sight of the occupants: the female passenger had a large pair of sunglasses on, despite the chilly morning, and pouted into the vanity mirror of the sun visor as she applied a coat of lipstick, pressing her lips together against a tissue to blot and spread.

Jacks closed her eyes and pictured herself in the passenger seat of one of those huge flashy cars. Her mind wandered further and suddenly she was no longer alone. Sven was in the driver’s seat. ‘Where to?’ he asked. ‘My meeting’s been cancelled and we’ve got the whole day.’

She threw her head back and sighed, running her hand over her tailored designer jeans. ‘I don’t mind as long as I’m with you. How about lunch in Bristol? Somewhere with a view.’

‘I know just the place.’ Sven reached over for her hand and brought it up to his lips, grazing her knuckles with a kiss. ‘I think a nice walk and then lunch, with champagne.’

‘What are we celebrating?’ she asked.

‘Another day together.’ He smiled.

‘You spoil me,’ she simpered, placing her hand on his thigh.

‘That’s because I love you.’ He grinned as he put his foot down and headed for the motorway. She pictured the two of them travelling along the motorway with the windows down and the wind whipping through her hair. They had no responsibilities and no timeframe on their day. Jacks chortled and indicated to pull out of the lay-by. The dream dissolved, but although fleeting, it had lifted her spirits.

Sitting in the traffic, she beamed as she cleaned the dash with a spare bit of tissue that she had found in her pocket. The car in front moved forwards and Jacks followed suit in her dad’s old Skoda Fabia, waving and smiling at her various neighbours, whom she knew by sight if not by name.

Turning on to the Marine Parade, with the seafront to her left, her eye was drawn as it always was to the Weston Wheel. ‘Like the London Eye,’ as Pete always said, ‘but better, cos it’s in the West Country!’ She smiled at the big sky and the outline of the pier on the horizon, a beautiful sight to gladden any heart on such a bright blue autumn day. She ignored the druggies and dispossessed who gathered in the shelters dotted along the front. The season had finished and so they lay undisturbed on the benches, whiling away the day with nothing to stand up for. She passed the parade of shops, her attention caught only when yet another one had changed hands or been boarded up, which happened with regularity in Weston, especially when the grim reality of winter in a seaside town hit home.

Jacks thought about what she might make for tea, noting the students who clutched A4 files to their chests as they waited for buses in skinny jeans and silly woolly hats that made it look like they had animals or puddings on their heads. They stood next to young professionals who commuted to Bristol and Portishead and who were fast buying up Weston’s vast Victorian villas, extending them, improving them and pushing up the prices. She had admired those houses for as long as she could remember: beautiful, spacious buildings with grand fireplaces, wide staircases, tiled hall floors, boot scrapers by the heavy front doors and the odd turret perched whimsically above an attic corner. When she was younger she used to dream of sleeping in one of those round rooms, like a princess. They were now and always had been beyond her wildest dreams.

Sven and his family had lived in one of those villas and with hindsight she supposed that had been part of his appeal. Until she met Sven, Jacks had thought her own family were quite worldly: unlike her mates’ families, her mum and dad took her to the pub, where they would eat scampi and chips or, in the summer, give her the choice of KP cheese-and-onion crisps or nuts while they sat outside. Her dad would always have a pint, her mum a Martini-and-lemonade with a slice of lemon on the side of the glass, and she would have Pepsi in a bottle, which she drank through a straw. To her, Pepsi meant America, and she coveted all things American. But Sven made her realise that her family was anything but worldly. Their occasional holiday in a Devon caravan park and the odd day trip to London were nothing compared to his globetrotting childhood. She listened in awe to his tales of aeroplanes, mountains, deserts and palm-fringed tropical beaches. Another world entirely. The more she learnt of exotic destinations far and wide, the less enamoured she became with the familiar streets of Weston-super-Mare.

‘Ah, Sven…’

She pictured her dad’s disapproving stare. ‘Don’t look at me like that! I can remember him, can’t I? There’s no harm in that, Dad.’

Ever since he’d passed away, she’d carried a little image of him inside her head. Not the sort of snapshot that might materialise when she visited a place they used to go to together or heard a piece of music he’d liked. No, this was literally a mini picture of him, a younger and happier version, his hair still dark and lustrous, his eyes crinkling with humour and a twist about his mouth as though he was about to laugh. An image of him from the days before the gauze of sickness had muted every part of him. And this image sat at the centre of her mind, always. So much so that if she wanted to read a page or look at a picture, she almost had to duck around him.

The lights in the town centre were in her favour and she got through the one-way system in a haze of green. She thought that she was probably the only person who hoped for red lights, wanting to enjoy the solitude a little longer.

Turning the key in the front-door lock, she shouted, ‘I’m back, Mum!’ She climbed the stairs, opened the bedroom and was unsurprised to see her mother sitting upright, her fingers fidgeting with the bow of her bed jacket.

‘Have you got my letter?’ Ida asked anxiously. ‘I need it.’

‘No. Postman hasn’t been yet.’ Jacks walked to the open window and closed it a little. The place smelt fresher, better now that the bed had been stripped and the air had had a chance to circulate. ‘How about I make you some porridge? Or would you prefer toast today?’

‘When’s Don coming?’ she asked.

‘I’m not sure.’ Jacks smiled, still uncertain how best to respond to the request for her father.

‘I didn’t want it all written down and now I don’t know where the letter has got to.’

Jacks sighed and sat on the side of the bed. She pushed her mother’s bed jacket up her arm, watching it gather in little folds under her elbow. She then squeezed out a blob of hand cream and massaged it into her bony fingers, slender wrists and pale palms.

‘Smell that, Mum, it’s lavender. Isn’t it lovely?’ She lifted her mum’s hand and placed it under her nose.

‘Smells like France.’ And just like that, a moment of comprehension, a memory from another time and place that floated clear and acute to the top of the cloudy soup of her thoughts.

‘That’s right! You and Dad had a lovely trip to France, didn’t you? Do you remember going to the lavender fields? You went on a coach and you brought me back a dried bunch. It kept its scent for ages. I had it hanging in the kitchen, it was gorgeous. Everyone commented on it.’ She smiled, remembering her parents’ big adventure for their golden wedding anniversary. Her dad had packed three packets of Rich Tea biscuits and enough fish-paste sandwiches to last the whole four days, just in case they didn’t like the food.