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Library of Congress Cataloging-in-Publication Data

Douglas, Pamela

 Writing the TV drama series / Pamela Douglas. -- 3rd ed.

       p. cm.

 Includes bibliographical references.

 ISBN 978-1-61593-058-6

1. Television authorship. 2. Television series--Authorship. I. Title.

 PN1992.7.D68 2011

 808.2’25--dc22

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To Raya Yarbrough and John Spencer with love

T
ABLE
O
F
C
ONTENTS

PREFACE TO THE THIRD EDITION

INTRODUCTION

WHAT’S NEW IN THIS EDITION

HOW TO USE THIS BOOK

If You’re a Writer…

If You’re a Teacher…

FROM JOHN WELLS

Executive Producer:
ER, The West Wing, Southland

C
HAPTER
O
NE

WHAT’S SO SPECIAL ABOUT TV DRAMA SERIES?

Three Qualities of Episodic TV Series

Episodic Characterization

The “Long Narrative”

Anthologies

Series with closure

Serials

Collaboration

Five Myths About Television

Myth 1: TV is small movies.

Myth 2: TV is cheap.

Myth 3: You can’t do that on TV.

Myth 4: All TV series are the same.

Myth 5: Television is a wasteland.

The Rules of Series TV

• An hour show has to fit an hour.

• Series deadlines are for real.

• Drama series have an act structure.

• Each series fits a franchise.

Ready, Set, Go!

Summary Points

What’s New?

SPOTLIGHT ON DRAMEDY

GUEST SPEAKER: DAVID ISAACS
(
M*A*S*H, Cheers, Frasier, Mad Men)

C
HAPTER
T
WO

HOW SHOWS GET ON TV AND THE TV SEASON

Chart: Traditional Two-Year Development and Production of a New Show

Year One

April: Create Your Proposal

(1)  Write a TV Format

(2)  Write a Pilot

(3)  Write a “Backdoor Pilot”

(4)  Create a Presentation Reel

(5)  Attach a “Package”

(6)  Get a Web Following

May: The Production Company

June: The Studio

July and August: The Network

Chart: New Series Development at One Network

September to November: The Pilot Script

December and January: The Greenlight

February to April: Pilot Season

May: Pick-Ups

• Full season

• Short order

• Midseason

• Backup scripts

Year Two

June: Staffing

July and August: Write Like Crazy

Chart: Sample Character Arcs for a Season

September and October: The Debut

November through March: Completing the Season

April: Hiatus

What’s New?

Summary Points

GUEST SPEAKER: CHARLES COLLIER

President, AMC Cable TV

C
HAPTER
T
HREE

HOW A CLASSIC SCRIPT IS CRAFTED

The Dramatic Beat

A–B–C Stories

Chart: Basic Four-Act Grid

Five- and Six-act Structure

The More Things Change…

The Two-Page Scene

Using the Grid

Teasers

About these Excerpts

Excerpt from
NYPD Blue
,
“Simone Says”

Analysis

Opening Scenes

Scene 1

Scene 2

Scene 3

Scene 4

Scene 5

Scene 6

The Second Excerpt

Excerpt from
NYPD Blue
, “Hearts and Souls”

Analysis

Cold Opening

Act One

What You Should Do Next

Summary Points

GUEST SPEAKER: STEVEN BOCHCO
(
Hill Street Blues, L.A. Law, NYPD Blue
)

SPOTLIGHT ON WRITING PROCEDURALS

GUEST SPEAKER: ANN DONAHUE
(
CSI: NY, CSI: Miami
)

GUEST SPEAKERS: MICHELLE & ROBERT KING
(
The Good Wife
)

C
HAPTER
F
OUR

WRITING YOUR OWN EPISODE

“Hearing Voices”

Finding your stories

Breaking your stories

Credibility

Rooting interest

The Grid

Chart: Basic Four-Act Grid

The Outline

How to write your outline

Outline Sample

Alternate outline forms

   
Fragment of ER outline

Sonny’s List

Your First Draft

Sample script format

Troubleshooting

If you’re running long

If you’re running short

At the end of it all…

Your Second Draft

Your Polish

What’s next?

Summary Points

GUEST SPEAKER: DAVID SIMON
(
Homicide, The Wire, Treme
)

SPOTLIGHT ON WRITING YOUR PILOT SCRIPT

Create the “World”

Find the Story Springboards

Populate the “World”

Make a Plan

GUEST SPEAKER: GEORGIA JEFFRIES
(
Cagney & Lacey, China Beach
)

C
HAPTER
F
IVE

IT’S WHO YOU KNOW: WORKING ON STAFF

The Staff from Hell

Mistake 1: Don’t separate from the staff.

Mistake 2: Don’t mix personal and work issues.

Mistake 3: Don’t have other plans.

Mistake 4: Don’t work at home instead.

Mistake 5: Don’t be precious about your script.

Mistake 6: Don’t “dis” the culture of the staff.

Mistake 7: Don’t work on a series that’s wrong for you.

The Good Staff

A Slice of Life

The Staff Ladder

1. Freelance Writer

2. Staff Writer

3. Story Editor / Executive Story Editor

4. Producer

5. Supervising Producer

6. Creative Consultant

7. Executive Producer / Showrunner

Summary Points

SPOTLIGHT ON “UNSCRIPTED/REALITY” SHOWS

GUEST SPEAKER: SCOTT A. STONE
(
The Mole, The Joe Schmo Show, Top Design
)

C
HAPTER
S
IX

HOW TO BREAK IN

The rules:

Write what you love.

Don’t spec the series you plan to pitch.

Ask the right questions about a series.

Have the right tools.

Have representation.

Be in Los Angeles.

The secret of success

Summary Points

What’s New?

C
HAPTER
S
EVEN

LIFE AFTER FILM SCHOOL: CAUTIONARY TALES AND SUCCESS STORIES

The Class of ’97

Three Years Later

Seven Years after Graduating

Fourteen Years after Graduating

C
HAPTER
E
IGHT

THE FUTURE OF TV DRAMA SERIES

GUEST SPEAKER: DAVID GOETSCH
(
The Big Bang Theory, 3rd Rock from the Sun
)

A TOUR OF THE FUTURE

Internet Drama Series

Webisodes

The Web is Dead

HOME IS THE WHOLE WORLD

Right Now

CONCLUSION

RESOURCES FOR YOU

GLOSSARY

ABOUT THE AUTHOR

P
REFACE TO THE
T
HIRD
E
DITION

In times of great change, the question is:
what remains?

In 2005, when the First Edition of
Writing the TV Drama Series
was published, the rules of TV were knowable and clear. Hour dramas had four acts with commercial breaks every 13 minutes or so. A network TV season was usually 22 episodes that ran from September to May. And viewers sat on living room couches to watch their TV sets, tuning in to their favorite programs at the times when the programs were scheduled for broadcast.

Back then, I wanted to tell you how to get into this field and do good work once you’re here. That much remains.

By the Second Edition in 2007, many of the rules had changed — but the rules were still clear. On broadcast TV, hour drama shows went to five or six acts; basic cable was offering scripted series that followed traditional paradigms; on premium cable, HBO and Showtime always won the critical awards, and their commercial-free model had become a distinct form of its own. Pilot opportunities for new writers had blown open, but the pilots themselves were written and made the same way they’d always been.

Back then, I wanted to tell you how to use the new rules to write well and succeed. That remains also.

For the Third Edition, I initially thought I’d update the major shows, add a few fresh interviews, and reflect more of what’s happening in alternative forms and on the Internet. But as I researched this edition, I discovered that almost everyone — from showrunners to struggling writers to industry executives to new media creators — were no longer merely adjusting the rules. Now they were asking basic questions: What is television? What is drama? What is a series? What are the delivery options? What are our obligations to the audience? Does a mass audience exist? Even what is reality?

And yet, after the smoke clears, more remains than appeared at first. No matter whom I asked about the future of television, the name of Aristotle, the ancient Greek philosopher, kept being invoked, not only by writers of great drama series, but by someone doing Webisodes and someone else making “Unscripted” shows. Though Aristotle set out the principles of drama thousands of years ago to describe archetypal tragedies in the plays of his time, those essential dramatic principles remain today.

The writer’s skill at storytelling, understanding what drives human beings, the guts to touch the passions, fears and aspirations of viewers, and honestly portray the universal issues of our lives — that content still relies on the art, craft, and insight of people who write.

So this Third Edition will present it all: the traditional basis for writing TV drama juxtaposed with new forms, traditional delivery systems seen in the light of current technology, and interviews with “Guest Speakers” whose ideas diverge from each other more than in past editions. These range from deep social reality that concerns the creator of
The Wire
, to nuts-and-bolts from a producer of so-called “Reality” shows, and from working writers coping with a shifting marketplace to programming decisions by the President of AMC cable who is part of shifting that marketplace.

In the past I paraphrased
All About Eve
, advising readers to hold on to their seat belts. But in zero gravity, the challenge is instead to go with the flow as you explore an evolving landscape. In a world afloat, it turns out that the TV drama series is something that does remain.

I
NTRODUCTION

More than a thousand students have come through my classes in the two decades I’ve taught at the USC School of Cinematic Arts. At the same time, my professional career was growing to include story editor and producer credits on television dramas, the Humanitas Prize, and awards and nominations including Emmys, Writers Guild, and American Women in Radio and Television, and a position on the Board of Directors of the Writers Guild. Always, my screenwriting and teaching have complemented each other.

I bring my working life into the classroom: What is it like to be actively breaking stories, writing, rewriting, giving and getting notes, seeing how your scripts translate to screen? I clearly recall freelancing television episodes, but I also know how the other side of the desk reacts to pitches, because I’ve been in both chairs. I’ve written for both broadcast and cable, and for virtually every dramatic genre. In my class, students learn from someone who has been there.

Imagine you’ve stopped by a typical episodic drama class in the middle of a term. Ten students sit at a table, scripts and DVDs from our in-class library —
House, The Good Wife, Mad Men, Breaking Bad, Dexter, The Wire
— among others in the middle. The class has not begun, but people are returning scripts and discs, reaching for one they want next.

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