Beyond the Nightmare Gate (25 page)

We have taken our unique opportunity to correct errors and to enforce a standard of English usage. We list our changes here. If you see anything that needs correction, please
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the Project Aon Staff.

(
Title Page
) Replaced ‘BEYOND THE NIGHTMARE GATE’ with ‘
Beyond the Nightmare Gate
’. Replaced ‘THE WORLD OF LONE WOLF’ with ‘
The World of Lone Wolf
’.

(
Of the Coming of Grey Star
) Replaced ‘magicial’ with ‘magical’. Replaced ‘the Earth’ with ‘Magnamund’. Replaced ‘new found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘mists and’ with ‘mists, and’. Replaced ‘forests and’ with ‘forests, and’.

(
The Story So Far …
) Removed ‘ To step through, turn to 1.’, as the reader is not meant to pass by the rules sections. Replaced ‘Daziarn plane’ with ‘Daziarn Plane’.

(
The Game Rules
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘eg’ with ‘e.g.’. Removed ‘ at the front of this book’. Removed ‘ If you run out of space, you can copy out the chart or have it photocopied.’. Removed ‘ on the last page of this book’. Replaced ‘adventure and’ with ‘adventure, and’. Replaced ‘falls to zero’ with ‘falls to zero or below’. Replaced ‘book two’ with ‘Book Two’. Replaced ‘falls to zero’ with ‘falls to zero or below’. Replaced ‘Grey Star’ with ‘
Grey Star
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
Magical Powers
) Replaced ‘ie’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘eg’ with ‘e.g.’ and ‘quarterstaff yet’ with ‘quarterstaff, yet’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘lesser magicks’ with ‘Lesser Magicks’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘magical powers’ with ‘Magical Powers’. Replaced ‘magical power’ with ‘Magical Power’. Replaced ‘five powers’ with ‘five Powers’. Replaced ‘five or six powers’ with ‘five or six Powers’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘power’ with ‘Power’. Replaced ‘alchemy’ with ‘Alchemy’. Replaced ‘prophecy’ with ‘Prophecy’. Replaced ‘divination’ with ‘Prophecy’ as in
Grey Star the Wizard
, to avoid confusion. Replaced ‘are, is’ with ‘are is’. Replaced ‘Earth and’ with ‘Earth, and’. Replaced ‘Grey Star’ with ‘
Grey Star
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘mind or’ with ‘mind, or’. Replaced ‘will be of use’ with ‘may be of use’. Replaced ‘Elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’.

(
Equipment
) Replaced ‘sulphur’ with ‘Sulphur’. Replaced ‘saltpetre’ with ‘Saltpetre’. Replaced ‘vial’ with ‘Vial’ within the Herb Pouch contents list, ‘notes but’ with ‘notes, but’. Replaced ‘Shianti and’ with ‘Shianti, and’. Replaced ‘
two
weapons’ with ‘
two
Weapons’.

(
Rules for Combat
) Removed ‘ on the inside back cover of the book’. Replaced ‘on the page after the ’ with ‘in the back of this book’. Replaced ‘the one with the zero score’ with ‘that combatant’. Replaced ‘reduced to zero’ with ‘reduced to zero or below’. Replaced ‘points reduced’ with ‘points possibly reduced’. Replaced ‘multiply this by’ with ‘multiply the number listed for the enemy by’. Replaced ‘use, and have’ with ‘use and have’.

(
Sage Advice
) Replaced ‘score of zero
WILLPOWER
points’ with ‘
WILLPOWER
score of zero or below’.

(
1
) Replaced ‘moaning and’ with ‘moaning, and’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
10
) Replaced ‘Spider key’ with ‘Spider Key’. Replaced ‘feared by name;’ with ‘feared by name:’.

(
11
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘step on to’ with ‘step onto’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
12
) Replaced ‘that desired’ with ‘that I desired’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Chaos-Master’ with ‘Chaos-master’. Replaced ‘cruel gifts; gifts such’ with ‘cruel gifts: gifts such’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
15
) Replaced ‘Astral plane’ with ‘Astral Plane’.

(
16
) Replaced ‘man, and’ with ‘man and’.

(
18
) Replaced ‘Pipe’ with ‘pipe’. Replaced ‘Pipes’ with ‘pipes’.

(
20
) Replaced ‘Chaos-Master’ with ‘Chaos-master’.

(
21
) Replaced ‘despatch’ with ‘dispatch’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Pipe’ with ‘pipe’.

(
24
) Replaced ‘Power or do’ with ‘Power, or if you do’.

(
26
) Replaced ‘ears and’ with ‘ears, and’.

(
31
) Replaced ‘airborn’ with ‘airborne’. Replaced ‘combat’ with ‘combat.’. Replaced ‘forceful; ‘I’ with ‘forceful. ‘I’.

(
32
) Replaced ‘strike, then’ with ‘strike, and then’.

(
33
) Replaced ‘recognise’ with ‘recognize’.

(
36
) Replaced ‘himself and’ with ‘himself, and’.

(
37
) Replaced ‘Elessi but’ with ‘Elessi, but’.

(
41
) Replaced ‘Ethetron but’ with ‘Ethetron, but’. Replaced ‘point If’ with ‘point. If’. Changed the last choice to lead to
Section 165
instead of
Section 33
, as
Section 33
does not fit into the context of the story here. Replaced ‘Ethetron but, as’ with ‘Ethetron, but as’.

(
45
) Replaced ‘bells the music’ with ‘bells, the music’. Replaced ‘breeze and’ with ‘breeze, and’. Replaced ‘creatures but’ with ‘creatures, but’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
47
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
50
) Replaced ‘crystal and’ with ‘crystal, and’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘plane of clouds’ with ‘plain of clouds’.

(
54
) Changed the last choice to lead to
Section 165
instead of
Section 33
, as
Section 33
does not fit into the context of the story here.

(
55
) Replaced ‘point you’ with ‘point, you’.

(
56
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
57
) Added ‘ and wish to cease fighting,’. Replaced ‘If you have already killed the Elessi after three rounds, or choose to fight to the death’ with ‘Otherwise, if you have already killed the Elessi after three rounds, or if you continue on and win the combat’.

(
60
) Replaced ‘brighter but’ with ‘brighter, but’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
62
) Replaced ‘you but’ with ‘you, but’. Replaced ‘Gate, out’ with ‘Gate out’.

(
67
) Replaced ‘ ‘payment’ you’ with ‘ ‘payment’, you’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Chaos-Master’ with ‘Chaos-master’.

(
68
) Replaced ‘attack but’ with ‘attack, but’.

(
73
) Changed the last choice to lead to
Section 165
instead of
Section 33
, as
Section 33
does not fit into the context of the story here.

(
74
) Replaced ‘blinding: your’ with ‘blinding; your’.

(
75
) Replaced ‘sluggisly’ with ‘sluggishly’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
78
) Replaced ‘Elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’.

(
80
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Pipes’ with ‘pipes’.

(
81
) Replaced ‘for ever’ with ‘forever’.

(
86
) Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(
87
) Replaced ‘wings and’ with ‘wings, and’.

(
89
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
90
) Replaced ‘sucessfully’ with ‘successfully’.

(
93
) Replaced ‘Pipes’ with ‘pipes’.

(
94
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Chaos-Master’ with ‘Chaos-master’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘beasts and’ with ‘beasts, and’.

(
99
) Replaced ‘elessin’ with ‘Elessin’. Replaced ‘guards but’ with ‘guards, but’.

(
100
) Replaced ‘west and’ with ‘west, and’.

(
105
) Replaced ‘Crabkey, is’ with ‘Crabkey is’. Replaced ‘embarassed’ with ‘embarrassed’. Replaced ‘aren't you Crabkey’ with ‘aren't you, Crabkey’. Replaced ‘well … .’ with ‘well … ’.

(
109
) Replaced ‘cloud plane’ with ‘cloud plain’.

(
112
) Replaced ‘strength and’ with ‘strength, and’. Replaced ‘cloud plane’ with ‘cloud plain’.

(
115
) Replaced ‘statue’ with ‘Guardian’.

(
116
) Replaced ‘A Short Sword’ with ‘Short Sword’. Replaced ‘A length of strong Rope’ with ‘Length of strong Rope’. Replaced ‘A potion of Healing’ with ‘Potion of Healing’. Replaced ‘A Backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘A Spear’ with ‘Spear’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Items’ with ‘items’. Replaced ‘two weapons’ with ‘two Weapons’. Replaced ‘bat's wing’ with ‘bat's wings’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘first, then’ with ‘first; then’. Replaced ‘west or’ with ‘west, or’. Replaced ‘plane of unending cloud’ with ‘plain of unending cloud’.

(
118
) Replaced ‘Staff turn’ with ‘Staff, turn’. Replaced ‘vial of Ezeran acid’ with ‘Vial of Ezeran Acid’. Replaced ‘Ezeran salts’ with ‘Ezeran Salts’. Replaced ‘sulphur’ with ‘Sulphur’. Replaced ‘saltpetre’ with ‘Saltpetre’. Replaced ‘pestle and mortar’ with ‘Pestle and Mortar’.

(
119
) Changed the second choice to lead to
Section 100
instead of
Section 302
, as
Section 100
was previously not reachable and it fits well into the context of the story here. Replaced ‘cloud plane’ with ‘cloud plain’. Replaced ‘in the plane’ with ‘in the plain’.

(
121
) Replaced ‘Magical power’ with ‘Magical Power’. Moved the random number option last and replaced ‘If you wish to’ with ‘Otherwise, you will have to’. Replaced ‘guard, pick’ with ‘guard. Pick’.

(
122
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘cloud plane’ with ‘cloud plain’.

(
125
) Replaced ‘bunch of Keys’ with ‘Bunch of Keys’. Replaced ‘Keys, mark them’ with ‘Bunch of Keys, mark it’. Removed ‘ and carry them in your Backpack’ to avoid rules ambiguities.

(
127
) Replaced ‘Chaos-Master’ with ‘Chaos-master’.

(
130
) Replaced ‘silence; then, fear’ with ‘silence, then fear’.

(
131
) Replaced ‘turn to 83’ with ‘you are forced to fight the Jahksa. Turn to 123’ in the last choice, as
Section 83
does not fit into the context of the story. Replaced ‘Tower or’ with ‘Tower, or’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Key or have’ with ‘Key, or if you have’. Replaced ‘Keys or do’ with ‘Keys, or if you do’.

(
132
) Replaced ‘west and’ with ‘west, and’.

(
134
) Replaced ‘Chaos-Master’ with ‘Chaos-master’. Replaced ‘Power or do’ with ‘Power, or if you do’.

(
137
) Replaced ‘wings and’ with ‘wings, and’.

(
138
) Replaced ‘counter-spell’ with ‘counterspell’. Replaced ‘foorce’ with ‘force’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
140
) Replaced ‘cloud plane’ with ‘cloud plain’.

(
145
) Replaced ‘Pipe’ with ‘pipe’.

(
147
) Replaced ‘forseen’ with ‘foreseen’.

(
150
) Removed ‘ It must be carried in your Backpack or you may give it to Tanith to carry, in which case note this on your
Action Chart
.’. Replaced ‘ ‘Katta sheen, suono kow!’ ’ with ‘
‘Katta sheen, suono kow!’
’.

(
152
) Replaced ‘point you’ with ‘point, you’.

(
153
) Replaced ‘dragon fire’ with ‘dragon-fire’. Replaced ‘hovers and’ with ‘hovers, and’. Replaced ‘ ‘Katta sai, juno keese,’ ’ with ‘
‘Katta sai, juno keese,’
’.

(
155
) Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(
159
) Replaced ‘roof-top’ with ‘rooftop’. Replaced ‘bloodcurdling’ with ‘blood-curdling’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
160
) Replaced ‘rooves’ with ‘roofs’. Replaced ‘to154’ with ‘to 154’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
163
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Chaos-Master’ with ‘Chaos-master’.

(
167
) Replaced ‘balustrades and’ with ‘balustrades, and’. Replaced ‘cloud plane’ with ‘cloud plain’.

(
169
) Replaced ‘weatherworking’ with ‘weather-working’. Replaced ‘their villages’ with ‘their village’.

(
172
) Replaced ‘Wise you’ with ‘Wise, you’. Replaced ‘Shianti you’ with ‘Shianti, you’. Switched the order of the choices.

(
174
) Split the last two choices into separate paragraphs for formatting reasons. Replaced ‘to104’ with ‘to 104’. Replaced ‘strike, then’ with ‘strike, and then’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
176
) Replaced ‘it I’ with ‘it, I’.

(
177
) Replaced ‘restoring’ with ‘restorative’. Replaced ‘these buds’ with ‘these Buds’. Replaced ‘six Items’ with ‘eight items’. Replaced ‘pestle and mortar’ with ‘Pestle and Mortar’. Replaced ‘dose but’ with ‘dose, but’. Replaced ‘vial’ with ‘Vial’. Replaced ‘potion’ with ‘Potion’. Replaced ‘potions’ with ‘Potions’. Replaced ‘vials’ with ‘Vials’.

(
181
) Replaced ‘cloud plane’ with ‘cloud plain’.

(
182
) Replaced ‘for ever’ with ‘forever’.

(
183
) Replaced ‘cry but’ with ‘cry, but’.

(
185
) Replaced ‘white hot’ with ‘white-hot’.

(
187
) Replaced ‘What?’booms’ with ‘What?’ booms’. Replaced ‘possibilites’ with ‘possibilities’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Chaos-Master’ with ‘Chaos-master’.

(
190
) Replaced ‘Cautiously you’ with ‘Cautiously, you’.

(
195
) Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(
197
) Removed ‘ If you wish to carry it, it must be kept as a Backpack Item or you may give it to Tanith to carry, in which case remember to note this on your
Action Chart
.’.