Ms. Taken Identity
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Copyright © 2009 by Dan Begley
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Contents
For Robin, always
Ms. Taken Identity
exists because of the inspiration, wisdom, and love of many people, from a week ago, from twenty years ago. Thank you: Mom
and Dad; Tim and Megan; Mama; Lori; Sister Marian Niemann C.S.J.; Mike Lord; Fr. Rick Stoltz; Professor Charles Larson; David
Carkeet; Mary Troy; Dennis Bohnenkamp; the University of Missouri—St. Louis MFA faculty; the faculty, staff, and students
of Cor Jesu Academy; Tex Tourais; David Nowak.
Dan Lazar, for turning me in the right direction.
Colleen Williamson, for your brilliant comments.
Melanie Murray, for saying yes.
Tooraj Kavoussi, for spreading the word.
Special thanks to my agent, Laura Langlie. Wow. You’re simply wonderful.
To my editor, Emily Griffin: what a pleasure this has been. Thanks for your expertise and enthusiasm.
Thanks to Tareth Mitch, Claire Brown, and everyone else at 5 Spot/Grand Central Publishing.
I overheard the following conversation recently at the gym:
G
UY
1: How you doing today?
G
UY
2: Just another day in paradise.
And so it is.
H
ere’s what I’m doing around six o’clock when the apartment door flies open behind me: poring over
Who’s Who in Greek Mythology
, jotting down story ideas, nursing a frosty Guinness. Here’s what my girlfriend Hannah is doing: stumbling through the door
with her luggage. Here’s why it means big trouble: I forgot to pick her up at the airport.
She heaves her purse and her carry-on inside, then starts wrestling a lumberjack-sized suitcase over the threshold. The bag
gets stuck, but she promptly unsticks it with one of those vicious, shoulder-socket-ripping yanks, and rubber wheels slam
down on the hardwood floor with a heavy
ka-junk
. I can’t see her face, but I can see her hair, which is darker blond than it should be and plastered to her skull, and the
back of her blouse is sheer in spots and sticking to her skin. I didn’t even know rain was in the forecast.
“Here, let me help you,” I say, starting toward her.
She whips around to face me so fiercely that drops of water from her hair splatter my T-shirt and boxers.
“
No
,” she says—spits, really—and instantly I catch her drift: Back off. Shut up. Drop dead. Two of the three which I immediately
do.
It’s quite an accomplishment, schlepping all that luggage from airport to cab to apartment, up a flight of stairs—in a downpour—and
you’d think now would be a good time for her to catch her breath, say hi, maybe toss me out a window. Instead, she hitches
her purse high on her shoulder, balances the carry-on against her hip, and drags the bulging suitcase behind her, clomping
her way toward the bedroom, not even bothering to look back when she knocks into a table and sends a vase crashing to the
floor. She rounds the corner and is gone, and I’m left in the living room, thoughts and busted ceramic all to myself.
In hindsight, it seems like such an easy thing to have done, keep track of the time. After all, I’ve been doing it for the
better part of twenty years now, usually with expert success. So what happened this time?
Something
in the apartment should have reminded me of her, and that she was gone, and that I needed to pick her up. The TV. The sofa.
The coaster I was using. The vase that’s no longer a vase. Her stuff is everywhere, as it should be, I suppose: it
is
her apartment. How did I manage to make such a mess of things?
But the soul-searching must wait for later. She storms out of the bedroom like a tornado looking to touch down, and my gut
tells me I’m the nearest tin-roofed shed. Miraculously—or alarmingly—she swoops by me like I’m not even there and heads straight
for the kitchen. When a few moments pass and I don’t hear glass breaking, I ease myself that way and lean in the doorway;
this seems close enough for the moment. She’s changed into sweats, her hair tousled and frizzy, all her makeup wiped away.
She’s boiling the kettle for tea.
“So everything was fine in Houston?” I ask. She’d taken a trip there to visit her sister and brother-in-law and their new
baby, Hannah’s first niece.
She pulls out a mug from the cabinet. One mug.
“And your flight? Smooth sailing?”
Smooth sailing?
Shit, I’m already mixing my metaphors. That’s how rattled I am.
She gets out a lemon. And a knife.
I get the feeling this could go on for hours, days, maybe the rest of our natural lives—me speaking, her ignoring me—so I
figure it’s up to me to set things right.
“Look, Hannah, I’m sorry. Very, very sorry. I can’t say it any other way. I forgot to pick you up and it’s totally my fault.
But just so you know, I knew you were coming home today. I even made the bed.” She has to have noticed
that
. “I just lost track of the time.”
She blasts me with an icy stare. “You just lost track of the time?” she snaps, incredulous. “Jesus, Mitch. I talked to you
yesterday. I gave you my flight information. We said we’d get Chinese on the way home from the airport and have an early dinner,
in bed
. I haven’t seen you for five days. Five. And you lost track of the fucking time?”
When she puts it like that—in other words, in English—I get exactly what she’s saying, no argument from me. I’m tempted to
save her the trouble and tell myself to go fuck off. Still, the least I can do is try to explain.
“I got caught up in my book, taking notes,” I offer. “I had my cell turned off, the answering machine unplugged.” I give her
a helpless shrug. “You know how I get when I’m writing.”
She squeezes the knife handle and stiffens her entire body, making it clear,
yes
, she knows how I get when I’m writing. And doesn’t think much of it. But just as quickly her expression changes and something
darker takes hold. Her eyes glaze over, her shoulders slump, all the life in her goes splat on the floor.
“Oh, god, Mitch. We need to talk.”
She braces herself against the counter with all her weight, as if it’s the only thing holding her up. But then, by degrees,
she straightens and stands on her own two feet.
“My sister was the one who always dreamed of the fairy-tale ending. Great marriage, house with a picket fence, beautiful children
at the dinner table. Now she’s got it, and she couldn’t be happier. For me, it’s never been quite so clear cut. Maybe yes
to all of it, maybe I’d pick and choose. But most importantly, let love come first, and we’ll see where it goes from there.
But you already know that.”
Right, sure I do, I nod. But here’s what I’m thinking: What the hell is she talking about? She never mentioned anything about
marriage or houses or kids or love coming around. Did she?
She gazes plaintively into her mug of tea, as if she’s searching for something inside. The clock over the sink ticks off the
seconds. Finally, she turns to face me.
“You don’t love me, Mitch. Not the way I want to be loved. And I can keep making excuses to stay, tell myself that no relationship
is perfect and what I have is good enough and maybe it’ll get better over time. Or I can take the blinders off and face the
truth. That after eight months of doing everything to be at the top of your list, I’m still stuck behind your writing and
Bradley and all the other things so important in your life.” She takes a breath to steady herself. “And that’s the way it’ll
always be.”
She bites at her lip because she’s starting to lose it, so I throw myself on the fire. “Maybe I’m just not capable of such
feelings.”
She practically leaps at me. “But you
are
. I’ve seen it, in glimpses. Remember my birthday, when you took me out for sushi, even though you hate sushi? You did it
for me, because you knew that’s what I wanted. Or when you surprised me with the de Sordi print. I just mentioned the guy’s
name in passing, and you did all the footwork, tracking it down, special ordering it. Do you know how great that made me feel?”
Yeah, I think I do. Because it made me feel pretty good myself.
She looks like she wants to go on, stay with those happier memories, but she wills herself to push them away.
“I can’t keep living this way, Mitch, getting bits and pieces of you. I deserve better. And maybe I don’t have it all worked
out, but I do know this much: I want someone who makes me a priority. Someone who carves out a place in his heart that’s just
for
me
, and when I go away for a few days, he notices. Because in some small way, I make his life complete. And I know that’s not
true for you.”
I’d love to tell her that she’s got it all wrong, if I could, without lying. “Maybe we should start all over,” I offer, to
be nice.
She gives me a look like that thousand-pound suitcase of hers just fell on her head. “Oh, Mitch. Is that what you really want?”
I know how it’d go if we did; we’d re-create what we had—for a week—then arrive at exactly this moment again. I drop my gaze.
“Good. Because neither do I. It’s been exhausting, it really has been. I don’t have the energy anymore. I think it’s better
if we just call it quits, now, before it gets too… Well, you know what I mean.”
I do. Before it gets too
ugly
.
Despite the reasonably amicable end to things, we both agree it’s best if I just leave now, get what I need for the night,
come back in a day or two to collect the rest of my stuff. So I grab my laptop and story notes and dissertation books, and
slip into my September-in-St. Louis uniform: cargo shorts, flip-flops, T-shirt. But by the time I make my way to the bathroom
for my toothbrush, water’s running inside. Hannah’s in there. Through the half-opened door, I can see her sitting on the floor,
legs tucked under her in an awkward way, head buried in her hands. She looks like a little girl, or a little girl’s doll,
all crumpled on herself. And even though the rush of water spilling into the tub is loud and forceful and drowns everything
out, from the way her shoulders are heaving, it’s not difficult to tell what she’s doing: crying. Sobbing, really. I pause.
Maybe I didn’t pan out as the greatest boyfriend, but what I’d like to do right now, if I’m being honest, is get this whole
ex-boyfriend thing off to a good start. Go in there and wipe her tears away, tell her again how sorry I am that I forgot her,
and let me explain how it is I
could
forget her and assure her it has nothing to do with her, it’s me, and why don’t I just hold her or soothe her or smooth her
hair back, which I have no intention of turning into a bout of breakup sex. But I don’t, because I don’t know if I could do
any of those things sincerely or insightfully or unselfishly. So I leave.
