thought, must have less "terror of chaos" than other people. Enemies of convention, poets make slits in the cosmos umbrella ("the chaos which we have got used to we call a cosmos"), "and lo! the glimpse of chaos is a vision, a window to the sun." In any given poem, Lawrence's slit is made in a suspenseful series of little rips, all along the same line of discovery.
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"Fish" goes further than the other poems in being the mimesis of the sentiment of the mother as (now) mercifully everywhere ("cast abroad," in a phrase from the end of Sons and Lovers ). For Lawrence, poetry, wherever it turns, touches a Great Being, but never in the same place twice (or it ceases to be poetry). "Who is it ejects his sperm to the naked flood? / In the wave-mother? / Who swims enwombed?": the question carries friendly envy as well as wonder. The poem's structure emulates such unrestricted fish-bellied immediacy with the source. "The rhizome,'' Deleuze and Guattari point out in A Thousand Plateaus , "operates by variation, expansion, conquest, capture, offshoots"; it is a "short-term memory." Rhizomatic poetry is situated in various points of contact, as against contracting into "the dismal unity of an object declared lost," as did Lawrence's early verse. Such poetry carries the logic of lyricism into structure itself, beyond local wording and rhythm. Poetry becomes a body art of empathy with its creaturely subject. The model is not the syllogism, a square balanced on a rolling loss, but, instead, response-stirred physiological rufflings and rerufflings ("Turkey-Cock," incidentally, is another instance of the free-based poem). In a late work, Apocalypse , Lawrence says: "To appreciate the pagan manner of thought we have to drop our own manner of on-and-on-and-on, from a start to a finish, and allow the mind to move in cycles, or to flit here and there over a cluster of images."
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Many of Lawrence's subsequent poems pulled back from the generosity of a maternally sanctioned mimesis. Lawrence felt drawn away from creatures to "the unknowable reality which causes us to rise into being." With a few exceptionsnotably "Bavarian Gentians"his later poems are either more harshly wiry or, at the other extreme, more mushily yearning than the best pieces of Birds, Beasts and Flowers . They poke and rail (sometimes effectively) or else fall (never effectively) into religious consolation: "Lift up your heads, O ye Gates! / for the silence of the last great thundrous laugh / screens us purely, and we can slip through." Lawrence's language fell, at its worst, into imaginative dullness. It lost the lust for the refreshments of chaos.
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