The Dialogue Thesaurus: A Fiction Writer's Sourcebook of Dialogue Tags and Phrases (17 page)

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a wild pink color washed into her cheeks

 

color ebbed into her cheeks

 

color flamed into her cheeks

 

color had run back into her cheeks

 

color rushed into his cheeks

 

color stained her cheeks

 

color stormed into his cheeks

 

color stung her cheeks

 

grin lines slashed his cheeks

 

he ran a finger down her cheek

 

her cheeks burned

 

her cheeks burned as his eyes swept over her

 

her cheeks burned red with embarrassment

 

her cheeks crimsoned as she (...)

 

her cheeks flamed

 

her cheeks grew faintly pink

 

her cheeks grew hot at the thought of (...)

 

her cheeks grew pink as she (...)

 

her cheeks had taken on the hue of wild cherries

 

he stroked her cheek

 

his lips brushed her pink cheek

 

his warm fingers stroked her cheek

 

she brushed a teardrop from her cheek

 

she felt a tinge of heat (in/touch) her cheeks

 

she felt her cheeks grow warm

 

she felt her cheeks reddening

 

she felt the color steal into her cheeks

 

she gave his cheek a playful pinch

 

she murmured, a warmth in her cheeks

 

she reached out and stroked his cheek

 

she replied, a flush rising into her cheeks

 

she said, a coral flush tingling the tips of her cheekbones

 

she said, a flame on each cheekbone

 

she said, heat in her cheeks

 

she said, the color flowing into her cheeks

 

she saw a crease of amusement in his lean cheek

 

she touched his warm cheek

 

she wiped the tears from her cheeks (with the back of her hand)

 

the color deepened in her cheeks

 

the color had fled from her cheeks

 

the color returned to her cheeks

 

the flush deepened in her cheeks

 

 

USAGE EXAMPLES

All the color receded from her cheeks
. "What do you mean?"

 

"Please forgive me, Simon."
A tear splashed to her cheek
.

 

"How dare you!"
Her cheeks grew faintly pink
.

 

 

Face: Eyebrows / Brows

 

a quizzical brow arched above his left eye

 

a thoughtful frown joined his eyebrows together

 

he arched a black brow

 

he arched an eyebrow in sardonic inquiry

 

he drew his eyebrows together in a frown

 

he quirked a black eyebrow

 

he quirked a dark eyebrow at her

 

he raised an eyebrow in amusement

 

he raised an eyebrow questioningly

 

her brow creased

 

her brows knitted together

 

her brows pulled together in a frown

 

he said, a thoughtful frown drawing his eyebrows together

 

he scrunched up his eyebrows thoughtfully

 

he slowly raised an eyebrow

 

he tilted an eyebrow

 

his brows drew together

 

his brows had merged into a savage line

 

his brows lifted in surprise

 

his brows were knitted in a thoughtful frown

 

his dark eyebrows drew together in a scowl

 

his eyebrows came together in a thoughtful frown

 

his eyebrows shot up

 

his heavy brows came together

 

his left eyebrow took a quizzical dip

 

she arched her eyebrows

 

she said, a line of worry materializing between her eyebrows

 

she said, her dark brows tangling in a scowl

 

she slowly arched an eyebrow

 

she wrinkled her brow

 

surprise lifted his black brows

 

 

USAGE EXAMPLES

"Really?"
He quirked a black eyebrow
.

 

Her brow creased
. "What is she talking about?"

 

"Don't test me, boy!"
she said, her dark brows tangling in a scowl
.

 

 

Hair

 

he broke off and buried his face in her hair

 

he brushed a strand of hair back from his frowning forehead

 

he buried his lips in her hair

 

he drew his hands down her soft hair

 

he laughed against her hair

 

he pushed his fingers through her hair

 

he pushed his long fingers through her hair

 

he rumpled his black hair with a large hand

 

he said, a strand of black hair astray on his brow

 

he said, brushing a hand over his hair

 

he said, fingering her hair and discovering its texture

 

he said, his breath against her hair

 

he said, ruffling her hair playfully

 

he swept the chaotic hair from his eyes

 

he thrust a hand through his black hair

 

he thrust an impatient hand through his hair

 

he thrust the tumbling hair back from his eyes

 

he touched the wave of hair above her eyes

 

his breath stirred her hair

 

his eyes roamed over her hair and face

 

she brushed the soft wave of hair out of her eyes

 

she combed her fingers through her hair

 

she flung back her hair with a toss of her head

 

she flung the hair back from her brow

 

she flushed as she lifted a hand to her (adjective) hair

 

she glowered back at him through her tangled hair

 

she jerked the hair out of her eyes

 

she murmured, her dark hair spread across her pillow

 

she played with the wispy tendrils of her hair

 

she pushed a hand through her hair

 

she pushed distractedly at her hair

 

she pushed the (adjective) hair back from her eyes

 

she ran her fingers through her hair

 

she said, flicking her hair out of her eyes

 

she said, sliding a hand over his hair

 

she said, tossing her hair with a turn of the head

 

she said, toweling her hair

 

she smiled as she caressed his hair

 

she stroked the hair from his closed eyes

 

she swept the tousled hair back off her brow

 

she tossed her hair with disdain

 

she touched her hair

 

she twirled her hair with her fingers

 

she was glad that her hair veiled her expression

 

 

USAGE EXAMPLES

"I'll never let anything bad happen to you."
He pushed his fingers through her hair
.

 

"Okay,"
he said, brushing a hand over his hair
, "back to the drawing board."

 

"This heat is killing me,"
she said, flicking her hair out of her eyes
.

 

 

Head / Forehead

 

a frown creased her forehead

 

a sudden deep frown creased the man's forehead

 

a vein throbbed on his forehead

 

he didn't dare turn his head to face her

 

he dropped a quick kiss on her forehead

 

he inclined his dark head

 

he inclined his head gravely

 

he nodded his head

 

he paused and turned his head

 

he pressed his lips to her forehead

 

he raised his head

 

her forehead was beaded with moisture

 

her forehead was puckered in thought

 

her head was spinning, she could hardly think straight

 

he said, drooping his head

 

he said, pressing a hand to her forehead

 

he said with a brief tilt of his head

 

he said with shake of his head

 

he touched a hand to his forehead

 

he turned his head and stared at her

 

he wiped his forehead with the edge of his hand

 

his head lifted and met her gaze

 

she (pressed/put) a hand to her forehead

 

she asked, her forehead beading with sweat

 

she bent her head and looked mutinous

 

she bowed her head (slightly)

 

she broke off and her head seemed to swim

 

she drew a hand across her forehead

 

she fiercely shook her head

 

she flung back her head in laughter

 

she held her head high

 

she kissed his forehead

 

she murmured, her head slightly bowed

 

she pressed her fingers to her forehead

 

she said, a worried frown creasing her forehead

 

she said, ducking her head

 

she said, lowering her forehead

 

she said, resting her forehead against him

 

she shook a bewildered head

 

she shook her head

 

she shook her head (dumbly/mutely/tiredly/wildly)

 

she shook her head and avoided his glance

 

she shook her head at him

 

she shook her head firmly at him

 

she shook her head in disbelief

 

she slowly turned her head

 

she spoke with her head bowed

 

she started to shake her head, and then hesitated

 

she tilted her head and met his eyes

 

she tilted her head forward

 

she tossed back her head

 

she tossed her head

 

she twisted her head away

 

 

USAGE EXAMPLES

A frown creased her forehead
. "This can't be right, can it?"

 

"I hate it here!"
he said, drooping his head
.

 

She fiercely shook her head
. "No, I refuse!"

 

 

Mouth

 

an uncontrollable smile shook her mouth

 

a slow grin quirked his mouth

 

a smile crinkled her mouth

 

a smile curled on his mouth

 

a smile curled the edge of his mouth

 

a smile edged his mouth

 

a smile flickered at the edge of his mouth

 

a smile pulled his mouth to one side

 

a smile quivered on her mouth

 

a smile shaped the woman's mouth

 

a smile touched his mouth

 

a smile tugged at the corner of his mouth

 

a smirk sprang to his mouth

 

a wry little smile quirked his mouth

 

he asked, a smile at the edge of his mouth

 

he forced his mouth into a smile

 

he murmured against her mouth

 

her mouth tensed

 

her mouth twisted into a knowing smile

 

her mouth was tightly pursed

 

her mouth went dry

 

he said, a corner of his mouth quirking with amusement

 

he said, a grin of amusement on his mouth

 

he said, a hint of mockery edging his mouth

 

he said, a smile thinning his mouth

 

he said, a teasing quirk at the corner of his mouth

 

he said, his mouth faintly mocking

 

he said, one side of his mouth twisting into a smile

 

his mouth compressed into a hard line

 

his mouth gave a sardonic twist

 

his mouth gave a slight twist

 

his mouth grew mocking

 

his mouth hardened

 

his mouth jerked into a grin

 

his mouth moved in a smile

 

his mouth pulled to one side in a grimace

 

his mouth thinned

 

his mouth twisted

 

his mouth was cynical

 

one corner of his mouth twitched slightly

 

she breathed against his mouth

 

she looked at his mouth

 

she noticed the lines beside his mouth deepen

 

she pouted her mouth at him

 

she replied, feeling her mouth go dry

 

she said, her heart in her mouth

 

she said, her mouth crinkling into a smile

 

she said through a mouthful of (...)

 

she said with a sensuous twist of her lips

 

she saw his mouth twist sarcastically

 

the ghost of a smile brushed her mouth

 

there was a twist to his mouth

 

the words leapt out of her mouth almost of their own accord

 

the words were out of her mouth before she could stop them

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