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Authors: Joe Dever

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62
) Replaced ‘toa-wood’ with ‘toa wood’.

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63
) Replaced ‘leader they’ with ‘leader, they’. Replaced ‘isles of Cape Kabar’ with ‘isles off Cape Kabar’ (cf.
Section 93
and
Section 240
).

(
64
) Added a paragraph break between ‘table.’ and ‘ ‘He’.

(
66
) Replaced ‘artifact’ with ‘artefact’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Huntmastery and’.

(
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) Replaced ‘first mate’ with ‘First Mate’.

(
68
) Replaced ‘Great Masourn range’ with ‘Great Masourn Range’. Replaced ‘the eagles’ with ‘the Itikars’ in the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.

(
69
) Replaced ‘gold crown’ with ‘Gold Crown’.

(
71
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
72
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘black furred death’ with ‘black-furred death’.

(
73
) Deleted ‘at the front of this book’. Replaced ‘road to wish’ with ‘road you wish’. Replaced ‘To the east it reads: KHOR — 100 MILES/BISUTAN — 225 MILES. To the south it reads: KONESHI PASS TO BISUTAN — 125 MILES’ with ‘To the east it reads, ‘Khor — 100 miles / Bisutan — 225 miles’. To the south it reads, ‘Koneshi Pass to Bisutan — 125 miles’ ’. Replaced ‘the great range’ with ‘that great range’.

(
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) Replaced ‘creature who’ with ‘creature that’. Replaced ‘march, then’ with ‘march, and then’. Replaced ‘That's him,’ with ‘That's him!’.

(
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) Replaced ‘or choose’ with ‘or if you choose’. Replaced ‘tic, then’ with ‘tick; then’. Replaced ‘dead and unconscious’ with ‘dead or unconscious’.

(
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) Replaced ‘razor claws’ with ‘razor-sharp claws’.

(
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) Replaced ‘Bavari hills’ with ‘Bavari Hills’. Replaced ‘merchant's goods’ with ‘merchants' goods’. Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’.

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) Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.

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81
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
82
) Replaced ‘Minutes later the’ with ‘Minutes later, the’. Replaced ‘crowd erupt’ with ‘crowd erupts’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.

(
83
) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Bardsmanship, and’ with ‘Bardsmanship and’.

(
85
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘ —
Levitation
 — ’ with ‘
Levitation
’. Replaced ‘effects of spell’ with ‘effects of the spell’.

(
88
) Added a paragraph break between ‘cut.‘ ’ and ‘As’. Replaced ‘booms Raker, ‘I’ with ‘booms Raker. ‘I’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’.

(
89
) Replaced ‘battle sorcery’ with ‘battle-sorcery’. Replaced ‘sixth senses detect’ with ‘Sixth Sense detects’. Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’.

(
92
) Replaced ‘gold crown’ with ‘Gold Crown’. Replaced ‘bedsheet’ with ‘bed sheet’. Replaced ‘Zuath’ with ‘zuath’.

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) Replaced ‘four of them’ with ‘three of them’. Replaced ‘in Kirlu’ with ‘on Kirlu’.

(
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) Replaced ‘southern Magnamund’ with ‘Southern Magnamund’.

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97
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘main mast’ with ‘mainmast’. Replaced ‘rigging, then’ with ‘rigging, and then’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.

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) Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’.

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) Replaced ‘try and’ with ‘try to’.

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) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.

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102
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘Magnakai healing’ with ‘Kai healing’.

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103
) Replaced ‘every 1’ with ‘each’.

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104
) Replaced ‘Sligh and’ with ‘Sligh, and’. Replaced ‘battle wounds’ with ‘battle-wounds’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’. Replaced ‘points).’ with ‘points.)’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

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105
) Replaced ‘master Kai’ with ‘Master Kai’.

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106
) Replaced ‘tavernkeeper’ with ‘tavern-keeper’. Replaced ‘tavernkeeper's’ with ‘tavern-keeper's’. Replaced ‘
clomp
’ with ‘clomp’.

(
107
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘ —
Levitation
 — ’ with ‘
Levitation
’.

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109
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Jheni’ with ‘Jhani’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

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110
) Replaced ‘Koneshi mountains’ with ‘Koneshi Mountains’.

(
111
) Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced ‘belltower’ with ‘bell-tower’. Replaced ‘above, then’ with ‘above, and then’. Replaced ‘half their number search the other alley whilst the remainder stay’ with ‘half their number searches the other alley whilst the remainder stays’.

(
113
) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.

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115
) Replaced ‘Turn to 341’ with ‘Turn to 163’.
Section 163
is functionally similar to
Section 341
, and this brings the formerly orphaned Section 163 back into the game.

(
116
) Replaced ‘Magician's Guild’ with ‘Magicians' Guild’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘grey haired’ with ‘grey-haired’.

(
117
) Replaced ‘bales and’ with ‘bales, and’. Replaced ‘no longer of use nor value’ with ‘no longer of any use or value’. Replaced ‘record it on your
Action Chart
as a Special Item which you carry in your backpack’ with ‘record it on your
Action Chart
as a Special Item.’ as Special Items are not carried in your Backpack (cf.
the Equipment section
).

(
118
) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’.

(
121
) Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.

(
122
) Added a paragraph break between ‘fear.’ and ‘ ‘By’.

(
123
) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘ —
Shield
 — ’ with ‘
Shield
’. Replaced ‘As the splintered wood of the missile falls to the ground, you see your own Arrow strike your would-be killer in the chest and knock him down.’ with ‘The splintered wood of the missile falls to the ground.’, since you may only arrive at this section if you do not possess a Bow, or if you choose not to use it (cf.
Section 238
).

(
126
) Replaced ‘Sligh and’ with ‘Sligh, and’. Replaced ‘Come Grand’ with ‘Come, Grand’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘steeds, and with’ with ‘steeds, with’.

(
127
) Replaced ‘chicken and’ with ‘chicken, and’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

(
128
) Replaced ‘emporiums’ with ‘emporia’.

(
129
) Replaced ‘sea storms’ with ‘sea-storms’. Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘rolling clouds’ with ‘roiling clouds’. Replaced ‘orb, then’ with ‘orb; then’.

(
131
) Replaced ‘men, ‘there’ with ‘men. ‘There’. Replaced ‘rogue, ‘so’ with ‘rogue. ‘So’. Replaced ‘with this he’ with ‘with this, he’.

(
133
) Replaced ‘astrology’ with ‘Astrology’.

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) Replaced ‘Skull and’ with ‘Skull, and’. Replaced ‘details of your’ with ‘details on your’.

(
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) Replaced ‘northlander’ with ‘Northlander’.

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136
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘add 3’ with ‘remember to add 3’.

(
137
) Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’.

(
138
) Added a paragraph break between ‘you say.’ and ‘He looks’. Replaced ‘crowns’ with ‘Crowns’. Replaced ‘good-night’ with ‘goodnight’.

(
139
) Replaced ‘look-out’ with ‘lookout’. Replaced ‘a host of screaming warriors are’ with ‘a host of screaming warriors is’.

(
140
) Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.

(
141
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘ —
Lightning Hand
 — ’ with ‘
Lightning Hand
’. Replaced ‘ —
Levitation
 — ’ with ‘
Levitation
’. Replaced ‘itikar’ with ‘Itikar’.

(
142
) Replaced ‘Scented oil’ with ‘Scented Oil’. Replaced ‘Copper cup’ with ‘Copper Cup’. Replaced ‘Ball of chalk’ with ‘Ball of Chalk’. Replaced ‘horses, then’ with ‘horses, and then’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘mhaktis’ with ‘
mhaktis
’.

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143
) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Replaced ‘accordingly and’ with ‘accordingly, and’.

(
146
) Replaced ‘market-place’ with ‘marketplace’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘market-square’ with ‘market square’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘script: Bir Rabalou — 160 miles’ with ‘script: ‘Bir Rabalou — 160 miles’ ’. Replaced ‘You, too, are’ with ‘You too are’.

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148
) Replaced ‘sea-bass’ with ‘sea bass’.

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149
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘and with’ with ‘And with’. Replaced ‘with this he’ with ‘with this, he’.

(
150
) Replaced ‘Welcome my’ with ‘Welcome, my’. Replaced ‘Sesketera, have’ with ‘Sesketera have’. Replaced ‘After having heard’ with ‘Having heard’.

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151
) Replaced ‘weapons’ with ‘Weapons’. Replaced ‘Short sword’ with ‘Short Sword’. Added dashes to the list between the items and their cost (cf.
Section 62
).

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152
) Replaced ‘Koneshi mountains’ with ‘Koneshi Mountains’. Replaced ‘an inn and’ with ‘an inn, and’. Replaced ‘accordingly and’ with ‘accordingly, and’. Replaced ‘mhaktis’ with ‘
mhaktis
’.

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153
) Replaced ‘Zuath’ with ‘zuath’.

(
154
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(
157
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.

(
158
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.

(
159
) Replaced ‘few miles to the north’ with ‘few miles to the south’ in line with
Section 179
. Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountain range’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountain Range’.

(
160
) Replaced ‘hoofs’ with ‘hooves’.

(
161
) Replaced ‘message: Rooms — 2 Gold Crowns nightly, and’ with ‘message ‘Rooms — 2 Gold Crowns nightly’, and’.

(
163
) Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’. Replaced ‘Jheni’ with ‘Jhani’.

(
164
) Replaced ‘weapons’ with ‘Weapons’.

(
165
) Replaced ‘falls, then’ with ‘falls, and then’. Replaced ‘crew attempt’ with ‘crew attempts’. Replaced ‘Fernant and’ with ‘Fernant, and’. Replaced ‘he says’ with ‘Fernant says’.

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166
) Replaced ‘crowns’ with ‘Crowns’.

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168
) Replaced ‘itikars’ with ‘Itikars’.

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170
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘add 3’ with ‘remember to add 3’.

(
172
) Replaced ‘driftwood and’ with ‘driftwood, and’. Replaced ‘six crowns’ with ‘six Crowns’.

(
174
) Replaced ‘script yet’ with ‘script, yet’.

(
175
) Added a paragraph break between ‘fighter.‘ ’ and ‘It’. Replaced ‘vassa’ with ‘Vassa’. Added a paragraph break between ‘Malduz.‘ ’ and ‘ ‘We'll’. Replaced ‘neck, then’ with ‘neck, and then’. Replaced ‘chamber of the font’ with ‘Chamber of the Font’.

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176
) Replaced ‘first mate’ with ‘First Mate’. Replaced ‘say, ‘it’ with ‘say. ‘It’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’. Replaced ‘the Sergeant's’ with ‘the sergeant's’. Replaced ‘the Sergeant’ with ‘the sergeant’.

(
177
) Replaced ‘belltower’ with ‘bell-tower’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, or’ with ‘Huntmastery or’.

(
179
) Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’. Replaced ‘engine sputters into life’ with ‘engine splutters into life’. Replaced ‘A tangle of metal pipes and brass cylinders hang’ with ‘A tangle of metal pipes and brass cylinders hangs’. Replaced ‘Grand Huntmastery and Telegnosis’ with ‘Grand Huntmastery
and
Telegnosis’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.

(
180
) Replaced ‘Bavari hills’ with ‘Bavari Hills’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘en route’ with ‘
en route
’. Replaced ‘arrives there they’ with ‘arrives there, they’. Replaced ‘Temejun's’ with ‘Temujun's’. Replaced ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’ in the illustration's caption.

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181
) Replaced ‘notice-board’ with ‘notice board’. Replaced ‘clay tiled’ with ‘clay-tiled’. Replaced ‘paddocks and’ with ‘paddocks, and’.

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182
) Replaced ‘every 1’ with ‘each’.

(
183
) Replaced ‘erase 3’ with ‘deduct 3’.

(
186
) Replaced ‘north-eastern’ with ‘northeastern’. Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’.

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187
) Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.

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189
) Replaced ‘pursuer's torches’ with ‘pursuers' torches’.

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