but although metrical craftsmanship was still practised, we can detect a reluctance to show off one's skill too openly, lest it seem unfeeling. Jonson and Milton feel no such inhibition, and Milton's elegy is full of ingenious mythological conceits. A much more restrained conceit opens Jonson's epitaph on the boy actor Salomon Pavy:
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just enough wit to give the poem distinction, without appearing to drown grief in cleverness.
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Even more subtle is the delicate hint of paganism in the poem on his son:
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The Christian reason it is better to die young concerns sin: that to live in this fallen world, with our fallen nature, is to be surrounded by snares, and we have seen much of this in Hemans's poetry as well as in a good deal of fiction. Jonson's poem sets out to say this, using biblical phrasing, and then, unobtrusively, shifts; after the world and the flesh should, of course, come the devil, but in his place we have a half-acknowledged diversion into a purely pagan reason for dying young: that one avoids the pain of growing old. It is not easy to imagine that effect in a Romantic or Victorian poem.
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Third, this excursus gives us the opportunity to compare men's writing with women's and so return to the issue raised in earlier chapters, on the relation between texts and emotion. For it is striking, in this comparison, that the men are so much more accomplished than the womenstriking, but hardly surprising in male-dominated society. Mary Carey's groping poem does not contain any griefit insists effusively that God's will must be accepted; Anne Bradstreet's lines are completely conventional; and the truly moving statements of grief are found in Jonson, with his subtle rhythms, capturing the broken but controlled voice of the sorrowing parent. Indeed, the very technical skill of the poem becomes a sign of the emotion
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